Mood-boards
As a starting point and foundation to build on, I made sure I researched relevant areas and thought about what the concept actually meant before I begin designing or moving forward inappropriately.
PROPOSED BRIEF
Established heritage
New brand identity
Engage Younger generation
Break the associations of parents, grandparents & being bought at Christmas
Contemporary // suggestions of heritage and expertise
Outsmart the rivals
Product quality, Aroma & taste
USE THE RED SEAL AND WORDING CONTAINED IN THE PROJECT PACK
Packaging
Point of Sale Displays/ Advertising
And potential campaign proposals.
FEEDBACK.
By Andrew Foster
5= Excellent 4= Very Good 3= Good 2= Average 1= Poor
Clarity Of Concept= 5
Breadth of Ideas= 4
Appropriateness of Response= 3
Contextual Awareness= 5
Analysis/ Understanding of Audience= 4
Level of Innovation=/ Originality= 3
Quality/ Clarity of Presentation= 5
Areas for Improvement
You have done loads of research into branding & the company, you just need to come up with a range of ideas on how you can tackle their problems. Visual Mock-ups would of been nice to see, to help us visualise your ideas and objectives.
Additional Comments
Presentation was very clear. You identified your aims and objectives so that it was understandable to non-coffee drinkers or non designers. Good ideas on how you can modernise their brand for a younger audience. Would have been good to have seen some visual mock-ups, the ideas are there already.
By Andrea Cooper
5= Excellent 4= Very Good 3= Good 2= Average 1= Poor
Breadth of Ideas= 4
Appropriateness of Response= 3
Contextual Awareness= 5
Analysis/ Understanding of Audience= 4
Level of Innovation=/ Originality= 3
Quality/ Clarity of Presentation= 5
Areas for Improvement
Narrow down response. Find an appropriate method for delivering your message. Narrow down the message and decide exactly what your going to say. More visual research to do with your audience would help.
Additional Comments
The concept you've proposed is vague so its hard to be fine how appropriate the response is right now. Professional looking presentation of work though!
Personal feedback - totally agree with Andy's feedback, I could've provided some more visuals, such as quick sketches etc but to be honest I wanted to make sure my foundation and direction was as clear as it could be. Don't really agree with Andrea's feedback because it was as if she was looking for a fully finished idea and direction.